Wednesday, 11 March 2009

Improvements

There were no consistent points made throughout the improvement points, however a variation of opinions towards our opening sequence were made.

- The titles could be brighter and more appealing
- Could have developed on the narrative at the beginning, as it did not seem to fit too well
- To some, the storyline could have been made clearer
- More narrative could have been used

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